
How are these super powers for the characters in my story 10 points comments are best?
Jadzia – human
Crystal – to look at something and digest all information about it (movie, books, or peoples thoughts) (the person(s) thoughts can only be read thoughtfully one at a time and she has to have time to wait to be able to read another one)
Amber – able bring up memories from long ago and to block out memories (cause of bubbly personality) (thoughts are erased they can’t be brought back)
Marina – can make memories alter and cause creatures to be in fear because of their past that affects their present
Demetrio – be able to see what an object has been used for (if a knife has killed a person he can see that but can’t see who had done it)
Damein – can make self disappear from a room ( physically be there but unless someone pays close attention doesn’t seem to be there)
Jason – can make a safety net for a short period of time (other then who he chooses louses all emotions when they reach the net )
That’s a pretty good list I’d say. It leaves enough flaws for things to go wrong or be missed, which will help complicate the plot. And they’re not all perfect, which is the best bit of all! If there was one I didn’t like it was Jason, maybe tweak it a little bit to make it different.
I think your names are fine, remember that not everyone is going to make up nicknames for themselves like they’re the X-Men. Harry Potter didn’t have anything remarkable abuot his name and look what happened with that series. I think Harry Potter is about as random as you get, lol. Good luck
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